Syboleth ch. 22: Open House

by Aet Lindling

Published March 28, 2026

16+ Language

In A Syboleth folder

Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for language.

Chapter 22: Open House

Valerie had finally found the perfect piece of metal. Her hands were bleeding from the effort, but she had broken off a slender shard of metal from a computer case in the building and she was confident that it was the perfect shape for fashioning a crochet hook out of.

Once it was less sharp.

She started grinding it against the concrete floor, trying to smooth the edges. She didn't have much luck, but it wasn't as sharp as a blade anymore at least. Garrett probably had something she could use to sand the edges down better.

He had left a supply package with her earlier in the day, but she hadn't opened it yet. She could in theory ask for a crochet hook and he would gladly provide it, but she tried not to ever request anything special that he would have to purchase. It was bad enough that he was paying for her meals.

And her tampons. And tissues. And more things than Valerie cared to recall at this moment, actually.

She returned to the cozy corner she had made up for herself two years ago when she first arrived in San Francisco scared and fragile, taken by Garrett to this old abandoned building that used to be the offices of an advertisement technologies firm that he had worked at before he started doing the MRI research and joined Perfluous.

Perfluous Research was one of those things Valerie didn't care to recall at the moment, but it was being recalled anyway.

Garrett was responsible for it. Not solely, but he was one of only a handful of researchers on the primary team that had debuted this "Thinker".

Of course she felt betrayed. But at the same time, there was a twinge of doubt within her. This thing sounded weird as fuck, from everything he had said about it. Organoid arrays and time crystals with MRIs in them? That wasn't a large language model. That wasn't even generative AI anymore. She didn't know what to make of that.

But she knew one thing, that it was just as capable of taking her job as the AIs that had done it to her already. So how could she not feel betrayed?

And yet she loved him. She loved him even more powerfully now. How could she not? He was her world, by her choice. A bit of a Hobson's choice, but not one she was that averse to in the first place.

Her attention returned to the pain in her hands. The blood was dripping onto the ground here and there. She was running low on bandages, but she should still have plenty of gauze. She should've asked Garrett to supply bandages this week, but it would have to wait until next week's supply drop.

She retrieved her first aid supplies from underneath the desk she ate on, and got the gauze out. There was no medical tape, so she took a strip of duct tape and secured the gauze after wrapping her hand. After that she did her other hand, and then she turned her attention to the supply package.

Opening it, she found three Granny Smith apples, a bunch of bananas, a loaf of multigrain bread, jerky, a facial soap bar, the conditioner she liked, and something else. Yarn.

How had he even known that she was trying to crochet? This building didn't have any operational cameras left. She knew that for sure after she had had her jewelry stolen and Garrett hadn't been able to help.

Either way, it was very nice to have this to use instead of the industrial twine she thought she was going to have to use. Now then, about those patterns...

Valerie had bookmarked several patterns she was interested in crocheting once she had a hook, and now she pulled them up.

Wait, had he known she was going to crochet? Why hadn't he given her a hook to use as well then?

She returned to the package, and moved things around. There, under the loaf of bread, was a pearlescent crochet hook. She didn't deserve this man.

She opened the messaging platform she generally contacted Garrett on. She had sent him a message thanking him for the supply package earlier, and now it felt foolish to have sent it before examining the contents. He had read it an hour after she had sent it, but no reply. Now she typed a new message.

Thank you so much for the yarn and the hook, it's gorgeous. I hadn't opened the package yet. How did you even know?

She sent it, and suddenly became aware of a white blur coming towards the supply package.

The blur went after the loaf of bread, and Valerie sprang into action. Lightning fast, she grabbed the waxed paper wrapper and it slipped out of the beak of the seagull that had found its impudent way into her living quarters.

Squawking, the seagull flapped off to another room. She got up and chased it with a broom down a hallway to an exit door and ushered it out.

Great. So there was another broken window somewhere in the building, she realized, unless seagulls had recently learned to open doors.

Another thing Garrett would have to take care of for her. She hated that almost as much as she hated his job.

And then Garrett messaged her back. She opened his thread eagerly.

Hey Val. I'm really glad you like the crochet hook. I'm at a social thing for Perfluous right now or I'd talk more...

Of course. He had just helped debut one of the most groundbreaking inventions in human history.

Meanwhile, she was living in the abandoned shell of his old workplace.

Fabulous.

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vulpesvelox
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vulpesvelox wrote a review Review · Jul 20

Hello! :mrgreen:

Valerie had finally found the perfect piece of metal. Her hands were bleeding from the effort, but she had broken off a slender shard of metal from a computer case in the building and she was confident that it was the perfect shape for fashioning a crochet hook out of.

Once it was less sharp.

I like the contrast between the amount of pain and effort Valerie is putting herself through and the fairly ordinary thing she wants to make. It immediately shows me how limited her resources are. The first sentence is quite long, though, and repeats "metal" twice, so I think it could be shortened or broken up. I also like the follow-up because it undercuts her confidence in a funny way, though I wonder whether she would need to bend the end into a hook rather than simply make the shard less sharp. Right?

She returned to the cozy corner she had made up for herself two years ago when she first arrived in San Francisco scared and fragile, taken by Garrett to this old abandoned building that used to be the offices of an advertisement technologies firm that he had worked at before he started doing the MRI research and joined Perfluous.

There’s a lot of important information in this sentence, but it’s trying to cover so much that I had to read it twice. I learn when Valerie arrived, how she felt, who brought her there, what the building used to be and what Garrett did afterwards all at once. I’d split this into several sentences and perhaps give a description of the corner as well.

And yet she loved him. She loved him even more powerfully now. How could she not? He was her world, by her choice. A bit of a Hobson's choice, but not one she was that averse to in the first place.

Hm. "Hobson’s choice" means that there is technically a choice but only one real option, which seems fitting considering how dependent she is on him, though the phrase feels rather formal compared with the rest of her thoughts.

Her attention returned to the pain in her hands. The blood was dripping onto the ground here and there. She was running low on bandages, but she should still have plenty of gauze. She should've asked Garrett to supply bandages this week, but it would have to wait until next week's supply drop.

Valerie is surprisingly calm about bleeding badly enough to leave drops on the floor? This may be intentional to show how accustomed she has become to neglecting herself, but it felt a little nonsensical to me.

I do wonder why she believes she has to wait an entire week, as well, since Garrett appears willing to buy her specialised hobby supplies and would presumably bring medical supplies sooner if she asked. If the reason is that she feels guilty requesting anything extra, I’d emphasise that a little more here. It would make her decision to use duct tape feel more like part of her discomfort with depending on him.

Of course. He had just helped debut one of the most groundbreaking inventions in human history.

Meanwhile, she was living in the abandoned shell of his old workplace.

Fabulous.

This is a strong ending! I think it does a good job of reducing the whole imbalance between them to two contrasting images. Garrett is celebrating something which may reshape the world while Valerie survives in the remains of the life he has already moved beyond. I like that!

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This is a good representation of a toxic relationship! Garrett clearly cares enough to remember Valerie’s interests and provide things she hasn’t asked for, but every thoughtful gesture also reminds her that she relies on him for food, hygiene products, medical supplies and shelter. I think that is a very compelling angle, and it leaves me wondering who I should "trust" more in the moment. I like how your characters aren't neatly good or bad, which leaves a lot of room for interpretation.

Though, regarding the crochet hook, Valerie dismisses that concern very quickly! I’d like the uncertainty to feel more overwhelming, especially given Garrett’s involvement with the Thinker. Why is she so casual about that?

Cheers!

Lipton

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Tikaya wrote a review Review · Apr 23

Good morning Aet. New day new Syboleth =D

Ah so the expenses Garrett has are Val! He leaves her stuff! I guess he also got her to San Franscisco too? Or at least convinced her to come?

I feel like you could do a smoother transition to Val thinking abt Perfluous. She could have used the grinding of the hook, a repetitive task, for that.

Poor Val. But it’s not like the Thinker could double take her job when she doesn’t even have it anymore…

I really like this sentence for exposition purposes but also for flow: “ She knew that for sure after she had had her jewelry stolen and Garrett hadn't been able to help.“ Just… I really like it :3

Val: ladila, I WONDER HOW GARRETT KNOWS I’M TRYING TO CROCHET
Also Val: “Valerie had bookmarked several patterns she was interested in crocheting”

Ah Seagulls, menaces everywhere they go.

I really like the contrast you pull up between them at the end. And ofc Garrett trying to make sure that Val knows he’s not ignoring her, he just has duties.
Which she doesn’t have. Anymore. But hey, hopefully the crocheting will work out for her :3


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Aet Lindling replied · Apr 23

Yay! Thank you so much for all the reviews! You're right that I should have a better transition into thinking about Perfluous.



When one door closes, another one opens. If not, just take out your jackhammer and break through that wall.
— Toast F. Krestvwich